- We like the font and the style of the credits, as it gives a thriller feel.
- The close up on the characters and the shots where you cannot see her face, give hardly any indication of who she is and what she's doing. This gives great sense of enigma. :)
- there are a lot of positives for instance some of the shots used, are engaging, this includes extreme close ups and close ups, which keep hold back information keeping the audience interested which in turn makes the opening sequence more successful.
however there is also some improvements needed, for example there is no direction in the story line, therefore it might make people loose interest. there should be a sense of enigma but there also needs to be a bit more structure to the sequence. another way of improving it would be adding sound, this would help set the atmosphere and also give the audience a sense of what the genre of the sequence is. the editing needs to be improved as there are black gaps of nothing in the middle of the sequence.
- The close up on the characters and the shots where you cannot see her face, give hardly any indication of who she is and what she's doing. This gives great sense of enigma. :)
- there are a lot of positives for instance some of the shots used, are engaging, this includes extreme close ups and close ups, which keep hold back information keeping the audience interested which in turn makes the opening sequence more successful.
however there is also some improvements needed, for example there is no direction in the story line, therefore it might make people loose interest. there should be a sense of enigma but there also needs to be a bit more structure to the sequence. another way of improving it would be adding sound, this would help set the atmosphere and also give the audience a sense of what the genre of the sequence is. the editing needs to be improved as there are black gaps of nothing in the middle of the sequence.
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